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Exquisite

Exquisite
Spread before me
Banquet of 
Earthly delight

Feast for eyes and palate
How I shall dine this night

Moist richness

Flows so freely


Swallowing
My tongue slides
Cross salty lips

Author notes

prompt: caviar taste

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  • DeJaBlue
    May 14

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    I've had caviar once...wasn't impressed...this however is VERY impressive. Nicely done.


    • faderman1959
      May 14
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      How does it taste? I've never tried it. So I just took a sensual spin on it. Thanks!


  • Zombiefreak13
    May 9

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    haha you make caviar seem not as yucky as i would imagine it to taste


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    May 9

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    I'll never look at caviar the same again lol Such a sensual feast you have penned.. Congrats on the HM.

    • faderman1959
      May 9
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      Thanks Carolina Moon. I've never tried it so I just imagined something else.


  • guardianhost gold member
    May 6

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    ummmmmmm fish eggs...

    just love the vivid discriptive verse...I just love those little guys!
    Congratulations on your HM Trophy.
    Cher

    • faderman1959
      May 6
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      Thanks cher! Never tried them so I have no clue.


      • guardianhost gold member
        May 6
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        come to South Florida then we can take a spin down to the docks, fresh

        Or for the finer folks in about we can try our fill of red and black Russian Cavier more expensive than gold per pound. Tis a tiny group of delious bursts of sensual delight.


  • Sandygram silver member
    May 5

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    WONDERFULLY SENSUAL!!!!!!!

    Now this was sweet, sensual and an exquisite poetry. Loved it my friend. A delight to read. Hugs and smiles.

    Sandy


  • sweet arrival gold member
    May 4
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    exquisite indeed! sensually salty.


  • Daizee silver member
    May 4

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    I've never eaten it, but I must admit, you've got me strangely curious now.. lol

    Stacy


    • faderman1959
      May 4
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      I've never tried it either stacy. Just let my imagination go with the prompt. Thanks for visiting and reading.


  • pattyann4500
    May 4

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    Well, I've never tasted caviar, but I don't really care to. However, your poem would certainly entice me to give it a try. This is not only a tasty poem, but it is also sensual. You have done a really wonderful job on this one, my friend. Good to read your words again, Poet. Hugs, Patricia


    • faderman1959
      May 4
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      Hey patty its great to see you! How have you been? I hope all is well. Thanks for the kind words my friend.


      • pattyann4500
        May 4
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        Thanks! I've missed you. I'm doing much better. My words are coming back to me finally. Wrote a couple of things, and I feel like I'm back. I look forward to reading more from you.


  • Raspy
    May 4

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    Thats Caviar for you.

    I agree with your moist rich words. Yet, I have met some who gag at the delightful acquired taste of caviar. Lok,when's the piknick? P.S. Dont forget the bubbly ,preferably "Crystale". Good luck !


    • faderman1959
      May 4
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      Never tasted the stuff! Just used it for inspiration. I'll grab my blanket now. Thanks!

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