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Happy Birthday CookyLee

Happy Birthday to my Sister,
Happy Birthday CookyLee.
I know you're gonna tell me,
That you're only twenty three.

But I know better, I can count,
I learned when I was Three.
And you're the one that taught me,
You taught me CookyLee.

So keep yer fibs and keep yer lies,
And maybe when I'm done.
I might not tell the whole wide world,
You're only Twenty One!!!!!

Happiest Birthday Sis.
Love You.   .. me

FifthDove

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Written March 10th, 2004

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  • Autumn Whisper
    January 15, 2006
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    lol Great birthday poem FifthDove, I am glad that cookylee liked this, you are great at everything you do, all your poems are wonderful
    best wishes as always
    Moonstone Virgo


  • Janice M Pickett
    June 9, 2005
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    Lovely Gesture

    What a lovely tribute to your sister. 21 is such a grand age. Funny how it is still the special one but nowa days by that age most girls are in relationships. Often have children and STILL don't have the key to the front door. OH MY! LOL.
    Edited on Jun 09, 1:12 p.m. because 'spelling error'.

  • cookylee
    March 11, 2004
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    excellent

    Thank you sister. I love this poem. Made my day. Thank you. Cookylee


  • queen Moderators member
    March 10, 2004
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    Mom loved this poem. Her and shirley read it together. It was so cute. Really made her day. Queen


  • Dark-Princess
    March 10, 2004
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    Cute and fun

    This is cute and fun.Linda will like it.It is good to laugh.I have never really tried to write anything silly or funny.I think I'll give it a try...
    Tammy33

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