I look out the window, as the rain drizzles down,
remembering past memories that try to put me down,
I look at the good, then at the bad, is my life cursed
or just going bad!?
I look at the rain as it starts pouring down,
Never to let go of all the memories I've had,
they may not ever leave but I am determind
to make better ones than I've had.
My soul starts to fade, I wish to go on,
yet everything I've seen and done it
chooses not to go on. I will push on cause I want to make
more, better ones for the future, I will go on.
The darkness will follow, will be there at every turn,
I've learned to accept it as I turn, around every corner
the rain starts to fall, to match the sound of my heart beat
forever and ever.
I will jump the bridge, change my fate, will not die,
till I'm free inside.
I will make more memories, the kind i will not forget,
jump the bridge, change my fate, and will not die,
till I'm free again.
thoughts?
Comments
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thats just awesome! i loved it!
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WOW
Out of all your pieces that i've read, this one just makes me want to sit here and cry all day, the emotion is so tangible that it touches my heart, and makes me feel it.
Very very good piece of work.
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Excellent
Go dance in the rain, get saturated in all His love and glory, this is so beautiful, heart felt, and I too react that way. Blessings.
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