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We Fit Together So Perfectly...

As we are walking down the street,
Loving you is not a hard feat.
As I stare into your eyes.
I love the feeling you give me, it's a wonderful surprise.
I love the way you say my name,
Coming from your mouth it doesn't sound the same.
I love the way you smile at me,
It makes me feel like us being together is how it is meant to be.
I love the way you walk,
And even how you talk.
I love the way we fit together so perfectly.
It is as if we are one person when you hug me.
I thank God for sending me you,
He understood my pain, thank goodness he sent you.
You're like an angel from above.
You surround me in your love.
The sweetness of your smile,
And the feelings that go for miles.
And as I have to leave and go home tonight,
In my mind I keep remembering you holding me tight.
So as I wave goodbye as I drive out of sight.
I know everything is going to be alright.

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I wrote this for a now Ex-Boyfriend named Dusty

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  • really sweet

    my fav part was hmm gotta find it I loved it all

    "I love the way we fit together so perfectly.
    It is as if we are one person when you hug me.
    I thank God for sending me you,
    He understood my pain, thank goodness he sent you.
    You're like an angel from above."

    Its just such a sweet thing when God sends us someone
    to love us and be there through thick and thin....
    Weell great write....


  • Griswold gold member
    May 4

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    Awww What a sweet and loving write Amanda, obviously for someone you care very much about. I have some suggestions to help the flow if you would like to discuss them. ...Griz


  • maralisa silver member
    May 4
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    aw a very beautful write so full of depth and feeling throughout thank you for sharingmaralisa

  • awww this is very sweet sissy