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butterfly

breathed into silk air
turning helium arabesques
my exquisite wind borne color poem
waltz with me
to the delicate thunder of ten thousand harpsichords




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i made this for a contest (write one sentence about a butterfly picture prompt), but i didn't realize the contest was already closed, so here it is. i changed it from a sentence into a verse

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  • This is a very vivid and picturesque write. I like the thought of those ten thousand harpsichords accompanying the butterflies.

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    I love the butterfly. You did a great job with the flow of the words and the image it portrays. Thank you and best of luck in the contest