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make up your mind.

"make up your mind,
and i'll make up mine."
do you hate me?
or fucking love me?
(i'm so sick of this
        back--and--forth
BULLSHIT already.)
just give it to me straight honey.

either spill your guts
or hate mine.
[i just want to know the truth]
yes, i hurt you;
yes, i lied.
(does that really give you
      the entitlement
to tear my ♥ in 2849 pieces?)
i guess it does.

i've been c-c-crying for days now,
hoping {praying} you'd think you made a mistake.
(unfortunately you don't)
with desolation in my voice,
i ask you:
"did God put you up to this?"
and all you did was
            l.a.u.g.h.
as i offered you my ♥ on a
*cracked* silver platter.

[i know you think i'm worthless,
so is it wrong that you're still my everything?]

Author notes

5-4-09.
today he showed me just how little i meant to him all along.
he said i deserved it
for all the pain i caused him.
it's finally over. for real.

pour your soul out of a glass pitcher.

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  • [i just want to know the truth]
    yes, i hurt you;
    yes, i lied.
    (does that really give you
    the entitlement
    to tear my ♥ in 2849 pieces?)
    i guess it does.



    lovely powerful write doll, great work with the emotions running free sorry on the other hand :[

    xxx

    vanna

  • either spill your guts
    or hate mine.
    -shit; that is fucking excellent.

  • Wow, this was angry and pain-filled. Loved it! I particularly liked the imagery and description. Excellent writing.