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Little Butterfly

Little Butterfly
Swiftly Floating by
                          by
                              by
                                  by
I wish I could come
with you and float
on by
          by
                by
                      by
                by
          by
                by
                      by
I love you
beautiful butterfly
as you float on
        by

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  • tears.of.silence
    May 6

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    Welcome To AllPoetry

    Aww how sweet. My favorite animal is a butterfly. I find them so peaceful and free. You've done such an amazing job and the way you separated the stanza's with by.. by.. by.. is great. Thanks for sharing and welcome to the site.

    kahy


  • l0ve
    May 4
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    Awesome

    I like this! It's a great dirty-pretty and when i was reading it i could just picture a beautiful butterfly, in the middle of a field floating
    away
    away
    away

    Love the pattern of the second stanza!

    Please keep writing dirty-pretties

    Great Job!