Dieing in my soul
lifeless life.
watching you walk
right by.
Not even caring
to ask
what was wrong
with this pathetic mess.
Well you shouldn't
care i guess.
Cause i am just
a little mess.
Wishing, Want
thats all i do.
And no one
knows how much
i love you.
looking around
getting attached.
to the people
i love the best.
but finding out
there not always
going to be there.
well that just
another test.
The lucky ones
always get what
they want.
and i stay out
of that region
where i am not.
In a little places
of fears and tears.
No one knows
what i feel.
what do u think?
Comments
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You have a lot of gramatical errors in this that take away from your poem. A few conflicting sentences as well but i don't know if that was intentional.
Also, id like to know how someone can die in their soul..
nice tho. -
wow very powerful..great write
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