Smiling just to make it
look like i am having
a great time.
When all i want
is to die
in your arms.
Mending my broken
heart isn't helping
at all.
Sewing up my
heart hurts so much
the stiches seem to break
with every little try.
Maybe it better
to leave
my broken heart.
the way you left it
then hurting myself
even more trying to fix
my broken heart.
what do u think?
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Not one of your best.
Nice write.
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Awww... this is so sad. I can tell you that I definitely have had this feeling before, the feeling that nothing in the world is ever going to make you feel better. You displayed this wonderfully. Maybe putting more detail would enhance the emotional response even more?
Great Job!!!
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