I can see she's in so much
Pain
I can see
she's falling
down
Yet I can see it only in her eyes
and the way her mood is changing
She hides it bit by bit
But I can see right through
She's changing now
right back into
that insecure
little girl
that was hard and tough
and strong
Yet so insecure
that she never
opened up
and talked about what was wrong
SHe wouldn't give
them a chance
Never would
fall in love
I can see what she's becoming now
She's falling backwards
Instead of taking that one step
forward
I'm holding out my hand
but she won't take
it
I won't force her
I just hope
pray tell
to God
that
he saves
her
before it
is to late
Too much or too little? do you like
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I agree you should add more detail yet its a captivating write...makes me read it twice...maybe three times...I relate so well to the girl in the write...and to the one trying to reach her....well great write sorry for ranting
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little
you should add more deltail maybe but i love this
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I have to go hun
Thank you for your comment and intill we speak again
have a great day and stay safe, know that your always thought about in someones heart as well.
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Just right, actually. I had this situation with a lad at my school once ... it was devastating. Luckily he took my hand and we worked through it.
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Thank you for your comments.
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wow i really liked that poem
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