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Terminally Ill

[verse 1]
You're in my blood
You are my latest disease
A virus, a fever,
I sweat then I freeze
I need an asylum,
a strap-down bed,
you've got me infected
in heart and in head

[pre-chorus]
You make me sick [3x]

[chorus]
You come around,
the earth stands still
(Honey, you make me terminally ill)
Some may recover
but I never will
(You make me terminally ill)

[verse 2]
I know I won't relapse
cuz I'll never be cured
You're in my veins now,
so I rest reassured
you'll never leave me
I have scars from what you do
And when I die, then I'll know
at least I'm dying from you

[pre-chorus repeat]

[chorus repeat]

[bridge]
You're making me sick,
you're the perfect disease
Contagious, infective,
no more meds, please
I like it this way,
dying from a broken heart
From the inside out,
you rip me apart

[prechorus repeat]

[chorus repeat]

I'm terminally
terminally
terminally ill

Author notes

Mmm. Just... I don't know. It popped into my head this morning.

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Comments

  • MyAngel4
    May 9
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    amazing!!

    i love it!! it's awesome i can totally relate...it's so good!!