God's tears rain down so many times
for reasons very clear,
through days of trouble and of doubt
so often they appear.
When plagued with drought and earth is cracked
He's there to send relief
and all He asks that in return
hold fast to our beliefs.
When war and hate grip all the world
God feels such great distress,
His tears fall, for He loves us all
in hopes they will caress.
And when the wind twirls round the trees
His breath it softly sighs,
as evil taunts and teases us
with Satan in disguise.
His tears they also come to bless
with grace and love profound,
within His aura heavenly
those once lost have now been found.
Author notes
Prompt - The rain is God's tears for us
In a list
A contest entry
- The rain is gods tears for us. by blood.stained.tears.
400 points, ended May 11, 16 entries
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Comments
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How I wish I had this kind of faith in god, people are always so true to him and I wish I felt that to. Perfectly done sweetheart. Best to you in the contest


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I loved this..so serene and uplifting feelings to it. Great write my friend, as always!


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Excellent
So well expressed. Another amazing write. So very creative. Best of luck in the contest.

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wonderful poem, its so true too, the way that humans cause god to cry.
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a good poem, ah we cause him a lot fo grief i think, with our mad wars, and so he cries and the land is bathed.


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