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Falling in Love

Falling in space,
falling through time...
What an amazing experience
the anticipation fills your head,
your heart
your chest...
then you fall!
Head spinning dizzily
body suspended almost in limbo!
The colors twirl
and your mind is in a whirl!
You feel as if can scream fly or both
then you do,
and there is that second most amazing experience!
That's what I feel as I fall in love,
and I wouldn't give that up for anything.

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