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Dear Big Sis

Dear Big sis,
i know you may not know this
but you mean the world to me
even if it doesn't seem that way
ever single day of your life
i may be younger then you
but I'm not that stupid
i know your going through something
and need someone to be there
i know you have been to the dark side
i don't really know what thats like
i know you need help,
but its more then i can give
there's still hope for you
if you want to try a little harder
you can win this battle
i just wanted to let you know
that there's still hope out there
and that if you ever need someone
just remember i care
I'm here to help you through this
so whenever you need to talk
just come to my room
and everything we talk about
wont leave that room
cause i know you have your secrets
but just need one person to share them with
id hold them dear to heart
but behind a locked door
that only you and me own the key for
so just remember when your at the end of your line
it doesn't really have to mean that its the end of your life
there's a lot of people here for you
to help you in every way
there's no excuse not to make it through

                             love you,
                                    your little sis

Author notes

BLUE AND SILVER ROCK

i did number 10, just because it would be easier for me becuase i ahve been in the same exact situation.... in my situation, i was the one in the family who figured out my sister was doing all of that...
Written March 10th, 2004

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  • kristyncancer
    March 31, 2004
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    awww i love it i have a older sister and it is kool to have something to giver her i love you pattern its free and cool well if you want you can im me latter

    kristyn


  • nats21
    March 21, 2004
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    hey, you had the same idea as me. i wrote a letter poem for this contest! it was really well written and i liked it. good luck in the contest!

    natazzle21

  • notquitethere
    March 20, 2004
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    good

    Awww that was great great write and use of words i can feel the emotion radiating from your poem keep up the great writing
    Kelsey


  • icefire
    March 10, 2004
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    I like this a lot, the description is excellent in this, and it is like you know what has happened, or will happen. I like poems like that, ones that give some of the story, but leave enough for the mind to explore. Great Stuff
    Lewis

  • Godslittleangel
    March 9, 2004
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    Excellent

    Wow. Thank you so much. This brought tears to my eyes. I hope one day soon I can share secrets with my sister except right now she wont communicate and when she does she is violent. I thank you for sharing this poem with me.... just out of curiosity what happened in your situation? If you don't want to tell me thats fine but if you would I just want to know that there is hope for my sister. Thanks for entering it means a lot and good luck.

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