You and I together, under a mysterious spell of magical powers.
How does it continue, the heat from a fire that's been burning all these years.
And still there's the passion... our private rocket-ship to the moon, as if we've
never been there before. Yet we have and we will and we do, over and over again.
I'm astounded by the perfection, the flawlessness of our bodies moving together with the fluidity of silk.
The separateness of two souls fusing together completing a whole, could only be described by one word...LOVE.
It's because we love. If only mere words could describe the exquisite emotion that has captured us, forever changing the landscape of our minds.
I remember when it happened. The clarity of knowing that I had tripped and fallen
deeply and irreversibly in love with you. Life has not been the same since.
Today I feel the same excitement, the same rush consumes me and I am still madly in love with being madly in love with you.
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Thats great
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Well Done!
I love this poem because it is so deeply romantic and passionate about the one you love. Love is only a word until we put it in motion. If it is true love it will last forever, bringing the high of life a reality that some only dream they can have.
You have written a masterpiece Shelly and thank you for sharing.
Love & hugs,
Barbara
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This this great! Powerful wordsof meaning in my opinion. I have to agree with what you say, love is like a spell. A powerful spell that you just can't get away from. All those feeling you get when your in love and when you with the other person that you, it is magic. Well done on this write. Just one thing, You need to bring to 20 lines, few to many. You can do it without losing the any words.
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