the dust is a
fiasco.
the sky was a brick,
and people moved;
either god was there
or he wasn't.
but the truth is
there were people
and they moved.
and it was hot,
and the sand was
everything.
the tired tribes
sat where they would,
and made the world.
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Comments
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I don't know where you are going with this
but there is something there which merits reflection
and for that I say Thanks...
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interesting. I really like this but i agree you should put something in your authors notes to give your audience some refernce points....good luck honey!
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With no reference
It is difficult to discern, but if this is about the tribes of Israel, then the brevity and straight forward historical truth in this is profound. God or not, they who presented Him as god spread their enlightenment to the entire world and it continues to anger the atheist and empower the " Godly". Bravo
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