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Pack

Pack your life away.
Pack away your hopes
and all of your dreams.
Pack old books of poetry and
new notebooks freshly bought.
Pack snacks to eat on your journey
so that you don't go hungry.
And don't forget your youth
your family and your friends.
And please,
don't forget to pack yourself
either.

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  • emma...
    July 12
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    Cute poem, I really liked the ending. It'd be pretty terrible to leave yourself behind!