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"Metamorfosis"

Stirring in cocoon:
impatient shiver. How long--
Must I wait to fly?

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  • Not-The-Sun gold member
    September 6

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    ooooh i likey!! i don't usually read much haiku but this fit the contest appropriately and i am glad to have stopped by!!
    congrats on the HM and thanks for letting me read your wonderful words
    the last line really made me think!!


  • azure85 gold member
    May 4

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    Stirring in cocoon:
    impatient shiver. How long--
    Must I wait to fly?

    Oh, very lovely haiku. It could be about spring and the butterfly, or about me waiting to fly across the mats one day. Thank you so much!

  • Bruce silver member
    May 4
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    I think this is really good!