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the spark

and my heart, ambient
was the spark beneath my coat

a secret

water
could not quell it
or find a way through the wool

until I released it in the morning

and the spark joined the flies in the crisp beginning
of casts and the peace of a current

sleeping on the edges of rays
rapt in the confines of energy
to travel forever, deep and moving

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