The final moment
and you know,
it is time to say goodbye.
Two worlds
separated by fate.
Destiny divided.
The sigh of relief
but the longing
to make it work.
The final words spoken
and a lifetime of
emotion felt.
It is a bittersweet conclusion,
to a story of love and pain.
The final moment
and the last goodbye.
What did you think?
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Poet
Oh so true love and pain. Itis no wonder many seek the beds of just a warm body to ease their desires. Less pain, more pleasure. And love truly dies. Such honestly poet.. -
Poet
Love and pain. Is it not strange how they become grand bedfellows? But why? Your fine piece makes the reader search out the answer again and again.
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Sometimes it just doesn't work out and then is the time to write a poem that people can read and say, 'yeah, I know, I know, it happened to me once'
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For me, I write as a release, a way to move forward. It is also a great reminder of my past and where I have been. I can look back and know that no matter what I have been through, I made it through and I am standing here today ready for whatever life throws at me.
I am also very happy when people can relate and maybe in some small way they know there is hope out there for the future. Everyone should know they are never alone in their situation.
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Sad but true
A person really does not know what to say at that moment. Well conveyed observation.
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ELEGANT WRITE
A beautiful heart felt poem.
I especialy like 1 through 7.
great job.
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this poem is so coo
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now thats made a hard grown man shed a tear. magical poem of letting go. class carly
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