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Rush

the rush of adrenaline
bursting out of me
i wanna scream
i'm so happy
it's so thrilling
the idea that i might lose
but that i could possibly win
a chance i'm willing to take

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Prompt:
gambling

35 words exactly!

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  • Jfd
    May 13
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    it is such a rush isn't it? nice take on the prompt, thank you for taking the time to enter