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The Tank Runs Dry

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Fillin' her up, you lift and pump

generously squeezing loves handle with ease

Pressure overwhelming through a hoses release

spewing the hole with warmth, then a final squirting

then as you get up you pay the price...the tank runs dry

 

Author notes

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Choose one of these emotional states.

Angst/Pain, Erotica or Spiritual!


Then choose one of these places

Used car Lot
Convenience Store/Gas Station
Telemarketing Office
Yard Sale
Cafe or
Bank


Prompt: Compare your emotional state with that place!


I CHOSE EROTICA/GasStation/Convenience store

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  • DolceVito gold member
    May 5

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    Fuck Dayum, Tory, who knew pumping gas could be this exciting? Nicely done, Passionate One


  • Swangrnv gold member
    May 4
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    WHAT??

    L.O.L. very clever, and uhmm..yeah sensually appealing..l.o.l. a shiny winner for sure!


  • Swan song gold member
    May 3
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    darn it!!!!!! I knew it would happen !!!!

  • Bruce silver member
    May 3

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    This is hilarious! The way you have constructed this poem from the prompt is freaking brilliant!


  • The Drifter
    May 3

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    LOL--You have done it again. You have taken an every day insigifent event and added your own hot, erotic turn. GREAT.


  • Bosiarbooger gold member
    May 3

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    sweet

    what a cute approach again smokin hot lucky Texas is so big and hot best luck love though you should not need it, truely yours Rick


  • faderman1959
    May 3

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    Great fun here! Definitely put a smile on my face.


  • ScarletO gold member
    May 3

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    This reminds me of a gas station explosion then a fire hose to put out the flames. LOL You are definitely naughty.


    • PassionsPromise gold member
      May 3
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      me naughty lol now isnt that a line of shit

      you love me naughty admit it. this was subtle i thought...ah well...just shows i do too many of them lol


  • cricketjeff gold member
    May 3

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    Very naughty, and very well done

    Great stuff

    Jeff


  • RavenTheWhite
    May 3

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    wow. this was naughty! how many miles does she get per gallon! haha very good.



    fellow poet the


    • PassionsPromise gold member
      May 3
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      LOL now many remember she gets up and it runs dry lol...so , id say she pretty much is a hot investment..

      thanks for reading

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