Too young to know death,
but old enough to be me
High school, here I come.
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Written March 9th, 2004
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Hey, I like this Haiku and I think that it says a lot about you. Except for the high school part. We all go through life changing in some ways everyday. It is to bad that death is always looming in the future. Good job God Bless, Penny
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"memoires of a teenage highschool drama queen"
sorry..
it's what it makes me think of.
Nyx... -
13 is my lucky number. I had a blast at that age, as I can faintly recall.
I had two jobs on the 13th floor og corporate America high rises, that were just the best, pay, cush, ya know! My youngest daughter was born on the 13th and she was easiest birth giving out of four. My birthday is 113 (Nov. 3)
This haiku which is one of my favorite forms of writing is so detalied that it would take me another 50 or so words to really get into the depth of it, so for now I'll say, if they (kids)only knew, what we know now. Have to live it to know, and then sometimes we still don't learn. Hindsight is an awesome trick. This is excellent. Good luck with the contest. I love your work, and I will be back to read that interview later. Be well!
Renee
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Teens do live on the edge, thinking that they are exempt. I have one that defys death weekly, I could kill him!
Excellent haiku! You are real good with sentiments and exact emotions! Not too far removed from those years, huh?
Lynnette
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nice haiku, hmmm to young to know death as if you are dying everyone is dying in some way or another we are put here with the intention to die one day, old enough to be you cause you are wise and intellectial but i want to be me, high school here i come, still thinking as if you are a teenager ey don't we all like to relive our glory years, or do you mean that you like kids under age? intresting read never the less, hope you win,
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