plentiful harvest by Arkbear at All poetry

~*~

upon

silken petals,

abundant life hidden

deep within, licking as we roll,

dancing

~*~

many

scurry away

afraid of not knowing,

gestures of cursing, waves of

plenty

~*~

alight,

little buzzing

toes sail atop briskly

blowing breezes, efficient for

pollen

~*~

warmer

seasons arrive

we're so joyful, happy

as buds are bursting in lovely

gardens

~*~

be not

afraid of those

who come to assure a

plentiful harvest of fruits and

blossom

~*~

Author notes

Must place which Trophy I have previously won and the words..>>>

*I Want To Win*

....in AN's

Won Silver - "I WANT TO WIN"

Prompt - Bees

Garland Cinquain

Syllable Count:

2 4 6 8 2

( X 5 )

A contest entry

Buzz. by Black Narcissus. 3000 points, ended May 11, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
PREWRITES THAT HAVE WON BRONZE OR SILVER ONLY by liquidmindforever. 400 points, ended May 31, 99 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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liquidmindforever
May 16
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Like the form & content
Thank you poet for entering: PREWRITES FOR BRONZE & SILVER TROPHY WINNERS, ONLY

Wishing you the best

until then,m
stay
liquid
liquidmindforever
May 16

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RULES EDITED BY BEAR
Dear Poet,

Thank you for entering my contest: PREWRITES
FOR BRONZE & SILVER TROPHY WINNERS, ONLY

Please, return to the RULES. There, take
note: you've omitted two

Once you've complied
please IM with TITLE of your entry

Then I'll be pleased to read

Till then

stay
liquid
- Arkbear
  May 16
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  Hello
  
  I guess I need to be more careful with Prewrite contests just as much as Fresh writes....sorry about that.......and title is..>>
  plentiful harvest....blessings,
  
  Bear -
poetryality
May 11

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I love the fact that you my dear brother and friend have mastered this form! This chain is perfect. Just this morning I had to kill a queen bee that had gotten into my house. It hurt my heart to have to do so but the little bugger really should have not gotten lost inside my house. I used aerosol. I always do; whatever aerosol I can find. LOL

CONGRATULATIONS ON EARNING THE SILVER CHALICE!

Much Love Always ♥

Renee
- Arkbear
  May 11
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  Hey Sis I am about to fall into my keyboard from exhaustion....I shall chat with you soon.....thanks for the beautiful review! Get some more aerosol! Dirt dobbers are right around the corner too!
  
  God blesss you!
  
  Brother Bear -
Mercury Rising
May 11

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Congratulations on winning the silver trophy. This is a wonderfully descriptive and imagistic piece that was a pleasure to read. I've never attempted a Cinquain Chain, or even a Cinquain for that matter, but you seem to have really mastered the form.
Patpowers
May 9
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Beautiful work of poetry. You really know how to do it my friend! THANKS again!
Black Narcissus
May 9

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The form is beautiful along with an exquisite presentation. So pleasurable to read. Yet you really made me ponder, if somebody handed me the best poem ever written scrawled on the back of a beer mat what would I do ?

Wonderful entry. Many thanks for your poem.
Frogzter
May 4

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This is beautiful and I agree brilliant. You have perfected form my friend! It just don't get better than this display of poetic talent! Love ya bunches,

Sissy Frogz~
Sacred Ground
May 3

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This is beautiful; and I see a brilliant mind at work here. Great work!
~S~G~
Pisces rainbow
May 3

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a delight
thoughts of a Bee
brilliantly beautiful buzz
very creative my friend
God bless you...