He cast me off and left me to die,
Full of resent, My head is still raised high.
I am alone and left to die,
But this savage man shall not make me cry.
He rejected his guilt and pretended that i am nothing,
And in truth I am nothing... nothing but anger and anger something.
I use to have a heart gold.
Now its bruised, black, and cold.
Beaten day and night,
and I would never fight.
But then he abandoned me,
and set loose the demon in me.
I am the hunter, him the prey
Get down on your knees and pray.
Because baby, you will not beat me today.
After all these years of betray
Its time to feel my wrath of aggression,
Revenge my only obsession...
You worthless piece of vomit.
My pain you will never again deny it,
Its time for you to pay....
Not even God will stop me today.
Author notes
have you ever been abandoned? felt alone, cant get closure, make me feel your pain.......I am not sure where i got the idea to write something like this but I will say While i was writing i became very very angry.
A contest entry
- Abandonment by Sgt. Pepper.
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What did you think
Comments
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I like it. It's good...Let's see where it goes.
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a good dark and twisting piece of poetry that sets the tone of the poem right away, one can feel the atmosphere breathing down one's neck.
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amazing, i loved this poem.
how its rhythm changes, a truly angry and passionate poem, exactly what i was looking for, i loved the last line,
Not even God will stop me today.
its very powerful thank you for entering
alex -
yo dawg
kristen this is an awesome poem i think this would have to be my favorite out of them but dont get me wrong i may hate poetry but the stuff you write i would and am going to coutinue to read.
~PEACE OUT~
(HEHE)
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