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Un "Diamante"

                      Diamante
                  Bello, precioso
  Destellando, brillando, fanfarroneando
  Caro, prestigioso, llamativo, afilado
    Reflejando, cortando, majando
                  Dura, ordinaria
                        Roca

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Un poema que escribi para la clase de espanol.

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  • Swangrnv gold member
    May 25

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    hhmmm..

    i think a translation would make this piece really 'pop' for me. it appears to be good, from what i surmise though..