I found myself on a bridge today
I wanted to jump
Why dident i do it
Am i really so weak?
I dont want to feel this way anymore
Iv lost all will to eat breath live.
what do you feel when you read it?
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This really relates to the way I've been feeling lately when I let my depression get the best of me, so you got a big emotional response. Simple, getting straight to the meaning without wasting time on flowery words. Pure, unfiltered emotion. Very strong. The only thing that you could revise would be spelling, just because improper spelling can sometimes distract the reader from what you're actually trying to say, but it's all up to you; that might be the style you're going for. Overall, I really liked this
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Oh, geez...Girl, you got it backwards...The weak choose to jump...It's hardder not to, That makes you the strong one...You may not feel al that strong, Trust me I know you don't...I never did...
...But please, Stay strong...Don't let that urge/feeling Win...You'll regret it for your last seconds of life...
It's Better to live life wishing you were dead than spending your last momments wishing you hadn't.
~Message me...Mel~
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