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Autumn Migration.

Autumn migration
woodlice move into
the nesting box





Andrew Hide
10~03~2004

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Written March 9th, 2004

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  • Ava Noire silver member
    April 4, 2004
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    I don't care for bugs and woodlice are in that same category, so they can nest all they want! I won't miss 'em!

  • Peacedreamer
    March 11, 2004
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    Lovely image, managing to get the hope of spring, and the sadness of autumn into it. A delight.

  • Pari Ali
    March 10, 2004
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    Not for me the vast migration on the serengeti
    or the avain flights across deep blue skies
    For my pleasure small things suffice
    like a nesting box with migrating wood lice.
    Edited on Mar 10, 11:43 because ''.

  • Cinara
    March 10, 2004
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    original and superb

    OH, I was all prepared for an asymetric flight across the blue, and found a delightful haiku.
    So nice to wake up to. Thank you


  • BillS2
    March 9, 2004
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    Excellent

    Hi Andrew:
    Interesting Haiku. Never thought much about Woodlice before this Haiku. Thanks for pushing me beyond my little circle. Bill

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