Fluttering tickles thump hard from within
Movements of love as growth does begin
Purest possiblities to love and to nurture
Excited plans for a most perfect future
Pleasured hearts soar with the pain
Peaking to levels unable to explain
Exhaustion urges as resolve grows strong
Long painful night evolves to a magical dawn
Blessed with a love unimaginably known
Nervous and new as we make our way home
Completely entranced by all that you do
Love can't begin to express how we feel about you
Yes we were four and now we are three
But your dads love didn't die in that tragedy
Right now you are angry and no its not fair
But I promise you boy, your dad is still there
You feel as if the world will never be right
I feel the same pain but we still have to fight
You are boy, damn nearly a man
Pick yourself up as we BOTH know you can
Your father is there right by your side
Your fan and your friend, your most loyal guide
So listen to the whispers you hear in your heart
Cuz I swear to you son he's loved you from the start
And I am still here, will never forsake you
My resolve is still strong, will see the three of us through
So please stop hurting yourself with the booze and the drugs
You have something much greater,
Your mother and fathers undying love.
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A contest entry
- It's Been Awhile by tearrsofthemoon.
540 points, ended July 12, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this actualy brought a tear to my eye,i am so sorry for your loss,your love flows so sweetly through your word,another amazing poem,best of luck in the contest
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Thanx sweetie... yeah I know what ya mean about the tear thing... I can't read it cuz it makes me cry everytime.
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Another well told story, the rhyme is nice and the subject matter of an adult matter that can happen to parents, you told it well.
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This truly is a beautiful poem. It is so heartfelt, so true, and I really can tell it is written from your heart. The emotions are so raw, and are shown so well in this piece. It is written so delicately and the flow is wonderful. The rhyme really made the flow just wonderful. I could see the story playing out while I was reading the piece, and I could feel every emotion. This is really really good. I am glad you entered it into my contest and I got a chance to read it. I am glad you share your words with us.. Thank you very much & good luck.
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Wow. I can honestly say this has left an indelible impression on me. You're a very gifted writer and (this poem as evidence) an even better mother. Peace and Love always.
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Thanx! I just wish my son saw it that way...
Peace and love to you too and thank you again for the wonderful comment
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I Love you mommy! =]
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Thanks babes
I see you have edited your pic.!
Am I to assume that all is right between the two of you?
TTYL Babey cakes, big hugz
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yea but I don't really like that pic so I'm gunna put a better one up in a min. and yes Me and Brandon are back together........
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Oh this was really god write you have here, Thank you for sharing and it was a pleasure to read.
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Thank you very much for your comment
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Wow
Tears...And then deeper thoughts. How such a tragedy can lead to another. Your words are sadly beautiful poet & Amen.
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Thank you Bob
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a good poem that sigh sorrow but hope too in the ribbons of passing away, time is a healer as they say and it is true despite it being said often
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Thank you very much, I appreciate your kind comment
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I think a congratulations is in order.Thanks for sharing this fine peace with us
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Thank you for your kind comment on this emotional write, it is very much appreciated
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welcome, and thanks for your comments
Thank you for the comments on mine.
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Nicole, I find it so hard to make a comment on a poem that someone writes from the depths of their heart and soul. How can I say I enjoyed reading it when it is your pain? You have written it beautifully, in my opinion, and my heart goes out to you. Sheila
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Thank you friend, your support holds a great deal of meaning for me.
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BEAUTIFUL!!!
wow, this is so touching, i can feel your every emotion in these words..my god you have penned a classic my friend!!! i hope your son 'hears' you with this write, it is truly remarkable and filled with love and wisdom and guidance..a top favorite!!!
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Ginormus
Thank you
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