I'm low on family at the moment, but it doesn't get me down.
I don't have a baby brother but I want one now.
One that I'll be proud of and give him advice -
to miss him and cherish him and value him with my life.
You wont find a sister more caring, nor more fun or free.
So I end this poem here and hope that you choose me!
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Big sister.
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A contest entry
- NEW AP FAMILY Por Favor by Vintage Chiffon.
560 points, ended May 5, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Awh!
This is kind of adorable.
Good luck(: -
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Aw, this was really cool. Simple and to the point. And perfect for this type of contest. No BS crazy story, just straight up.
If he doesn't pick you, you could always be our maid.
And I love the title. It's blunt - but very true.
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Dont listen to him...You would not be our maid damn't lol.
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Aw, this is cute.
Hope you win the contest. -
cute sweets
your one of a kind -
hey i thought i was on the family tree
good job here hon
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I actually liked this very much . EXCELLENT write and thank you so much for entering it in my contest. It was very short and sweet and hit the point. I will let you know at the end of the contest who will be the winner if someone else submits something to be a big sister .
-Damien
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