just wanna hit an artery.
just wanna end it tonight!
but dont want to be unsuccessful
ready to end this inward fight!
dont wanna be in the E.R.
dont want them to stop the bleeding
want this to be the suicide
that im finally succeeding
noone shall intervene
i wont speak a word
i will go all the way
unnoticed, unheard
it might not happen tonight
maybe when its least suspected
when i smile and laugh the most
when it is the least detected
im so ready to let go
and sick of complaining
ready to get this over with
all this time ive been abstaining
i just want to die
im not gonna cry
ill give the world a lie
and in silence say good bye.
~Madison~
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I know these feelings all to well, then things got better. I think us, as poets are deep thinkers anyway which makes us a lot more emotional. I know it does me anyway. That is why I write. I would rather write me pain than live it. Good luck to you.
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yup...i really did enjoy it...and i really hope things start getting better for you..
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i absolutely love this!!!
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thanks for the comment and applauds. it means a lot, this piece was very personal and i thought it would just go unnoticed. thanks
~Madison~
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Such a sad piece
and yet beautifully written. I've been here quite a few times.
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thank you very much. yes, i too have been here too many times, and quite frankly, im sick of it. thanks for your kind words.
~Madison~
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