All by myself
Well maybe not exactly so
All by myself
Hidden on the back of the shelf
Where no one ever looks you know
No life in me, just vertigo
All by myself.
In a list
A contest entry
- Lets see what Ya got by Deceits Tears.
900 points, ended May 8, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Hi Billbard,
This is another enjoyable read.
I notice the poem comes under the 'Categories' as 'Sad.' Personally I did not find this piece sad. You seem to make 'vertigo' human-like - it seems like 'black humour' to me. Of course it is possible that I have the totally wrong end of the stick!
All the best,
Liveddog. -
I do love readin all the different styles and this was no exception
NO WAY should you EVER be hidden in the back of anything
Great write I thankyou for your entry
Good Luck
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