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Hidden Character

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I drank from fruit of the vine
no man around for me to answer
so I’ll dine on the labor of mine
and lead with the shadow dancer

As my silhouette reveals the real me
I’ll sit and take my leisure,
hidden beneath a towel is all you see
your imagination is working, I’m sure

Loin covering as when we began
Invincible…for I am woman.

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  • Majija
    May 7

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    God poem. Really fits the picture well. I especially like the sentence:
    "As my silhouette reveals the real me"

    Also I like the ending


  • Deceits Tears silver member
    May 5
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    Invincible...for I am woman...
    I freakin LOVE that
    Well done and thankyou for your entry


  • thepoetssoul
    May 3

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    Powerful piece of poetry, wonderfully written indeed
    This is fantastic work, be blessed in all you do.

    Tony


  • crimsondew
    May 3
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    strong images portrayed here...good imagery...All the best in the contest dear!