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I'm Not Who I Was

I am not mean anymore
I am not lazy anymore
I am not who I was
I am a new person
I am a new person
I am new
New
Yes new

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  • Olivias Violin
    May 2
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    What prompted you to change?


    • cute.pan8
      May 4
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      I changed when I met one of my best friends in 2nd grade. Now I'm not as lazy or mean. I owe my change to her.