A sheet of paper
staring at me
in the face.
Blank and clear
without a trace.
Waiting for words
to be etched into
it's history.
Yet nothing will
come to my mind.
What misery!
The fate of this
paper is
unsure.
Words or nothingness
will edure
its lines...
Author notes
Written after a test. I got bored
In a list
A contest entry
- Prewrites Preretites Prewrites! by pain is love..
560 points, ended June 13, 72 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This is a wonderful poem that truly expresses writers block. This poem reminds me of something I wrote when I was 14 but yours is much much better! Many times I do not like rhyme because It seems forced but your rhyme really enhanses the poem and call to the reader. You have tremendous talent and your only 12. Keep writing your words are beautiful and bring joy. Thank you for your entry!
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awesome
Hello sweetsoul,
Wow....you are only 12 and you write like this ???
you have awesome talent sweet one.
You have captured the experience of what we all feel at some time in our lives called... 'Writers Block', and you have penned it so well !
Keep that quill of your inked and never let it run dry, because sweetheart, you have so much talent.
I wish you well with your writing, and with much love and happiness too!
your friend in poetry,
~Anne~
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Sheer genius at writing so many words about nothingness--you have captured the very essence of the experience!
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Hmm.You do quite good at Writing after you take a test and your bored!
really, this was an interesting write to read.And it was nicely written.Good job Sis!!
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