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I suck at titles

Cautiously you observe me seep
Through wishful thinking
Convinced the tide in your eyes to rise from the deep
I search translucent mirrors for warnings.

Robotically I adjust the white veil
And he uncovers the porcelain sail.
Through experience, dirty stigma eyes,
Through brilliance.

The importance of values and morals
Over weigh temptation and desperate attention.
Clinging to the existence of loyalty
Walking down the aisle into an asylum of insignificance.

Unsure accompanying unwilling
Easy tasks come at difficult prices
Losing precious consistency
Breathing, at different paces.

The art of profound internship
Automatically transfers the fear of success
Advice at its uncommon stage
Needs experience; needs brilliance.

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  • GreeGree
    May 10

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    I agree with forever. I had to read over it. This poem had alot of meaning and so much to say in few words. it was great

  • i had to read this like twice, but it is truly an amazing peice. there is so much stuff jammed into just a small amount of words that were obviously chosen carefully. i love it, especially the line that says "Easy tasks come at difficult prices" it's very true as is the rest. it's beautiful.