He means so much to me I just wish he knew
because when I'm around him the sky’s a different blue
and when he talks to me my knees begin to shake
the last thing I want is another heartbreak
if he would love me like I do
I could tell him that I will always be true
but when I try to talk I just don't know what to say
because I know he doesn't feel the same way
He brighten up the moon and stars at night
he keep me seeing rainbows in the sky
he bring new meaning to my life
and now I believe in miracles
I just hope that someday
maybe he'll feel the same way
sometimes when you like
someone that much
you can't really put it into words
how you feel
you just kind of look at them
and well you just know,
the worst feeling in the world
is loving someone who doesn't love you back
your heart aches every time you see him
knowing that no matter how deep
you look into his eyes
trying to reach his heart
you never will
A contest entry
- Love, does it really exist? by geckogirl.
850 points, ended May 12, 22 entries
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Comments
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or you just become like his sister
then your trapped
always have him
but not the way you want
to touch
love
soul mates -
It was heartfelt...What bothered me is that it seems to have a kind of...idk...really jumpy rhythm, like some lines have a beat and some don't. It was very irregular in that sense. You've got a few spelling/grammar errors here and there, but nothing too serious. Over all, I did enjoy it, and could definitely relate to it =]
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I love it all, there is not one part better than the other
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