His voice tells me "I love you",
but my heart hears "I want you".
My heart says "I love you",
but he hears "I need you".
And my mind keeps saying "yes",
but my mouth keeps saying "no".
What am I to do,
if I can't be with you?
In a list
A contest entry
- Pic Prompt Quickie! by Beautiful-N-Broken.
500 points, ended May 2, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments Greatly Appreciated
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Wow, I absolutely love the struggle you've created here. Marvelous take with the prompt!!!!
Bravo and best of luck!
♥ Kate
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Excellent
A wonderful take on the image. Best of luck in the contest.
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Very nicely done and so true.. How often our emotions are in conflict, heart saying one thing, mind saying another.. You told this age old story well.. Good luck..
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This shows how easily confused you can be between want and need, lust and love... so effectively shown
Best to you in the contest
Shari
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Hello Shari! My goodness! How have you been? Thanks for stopping by to read and comment. You are always most graciously accepted and appreciated.
In God's Love
Three Doves
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Oh wow! Great write! Thanks so much for entering my contest! Good luck! You've done an awesome job!
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