Darkness envelopes me.
Standing as time passes by,
in this endless moment.
Twenty four years,
do not enter this lightfilled key.
Tones changing,
minds asking why.
Liers still lie,
people still die.
Smell the roses,
as the thorn exposes,
imposes upon this so called life.
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welcome to all poetry
Wonderful write, although I'm not sure of the use of elopes in the first line. Love the final three lines, great closing.
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Shawna
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wow this is deliciously deep, i love it
nice write, and welcome to ap
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