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She smiled, unblinking at the tree
as she watched the little lights twinkle
remembering what brought her here years ago,
mother at her side.

Looking up at the stars, it reminders her of Dad
and how he would ruffle her hair before bed
and kiss her on the forehead.

There smiles will never fade in Winters' eyes,
as she pleas to God to remember a little more.


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Name :: Winter



This is about a girl looking at a Christmas tree at Christmas and remembering the time she went to visit one with her parents when they were alive and how it was when she was a child. Hope it's alright.

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  • Kari gold member
    May 4
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    Aw, such a brilliant piece with the name.
    Thanks

    Kari

  • Kari gold member
    May 2

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    Hi! Thanks for entering

     

    Name: Winter
    Gender: both
    Origin: English
    Meaning: Winter
    Pronunciation: (  WIN ter )
    Form of:
    Itself (Winter)

     

    If you don't like your name please let me know and I'll be happy to get you another one.

     


    Kari