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Profile: everything but not anything

I’m convinced it's my destiny to talk about destiny.
That comes from my grandmother. However, it’s not that I’m really
convinced and, of course, not everything I am comes from grandma.
Afternoons behind the living room window, looking out, looking in.
Mother is at work, she would say, and will be back soon.
Conviction is destiny, and vice-versa, the impossibility to be me.
When I say it’s a matter of destiny, I mean, what else can I say?

If a moth flies inside my home, it's because a spirit is trying
to communicate with me. I’d feel guilty not to believe the contrary.
Guilt is also a sort of destiny. If the message is about love I want to
quickly capture the moth in a poem. I could mention  superstition,
how my head is heavy with uncertainties, how seconds move
like a thunderstorm, the way love chains instead of freeing,
how daydreams can lead to enlightenments of the soul.

Soul, a land without boundaries or road signs--all colours,
no colours-- any definition, in the end, will blow up and provoke
a second of blindness and I retreat to hills of unnatural greens,
hold a flower in my hand. Why does my soul feel so bad?,
a song by Moby asks. I see all of humanity roaming under
crescent moons -- where trees have become flowers,
flowers poems. The poems have no titles.



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  • neurosine gold member
    May 4
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    I think the titles have no poems.


    • maria
      May 5
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      You know, I've been thinking about that. Perhaps you are saying there is no on way of seeing/doing things. However, this is my profile as a poet, whatever that means.


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