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Lithium.



 


Firefly-thin wings so silvery stroking
the moonlight in tuxedo, sighing
sonatas in watercolour curve of
Aurora’s Borealis

Slight boughs summersault mid-air
as they let winds pervade marital
marrow, and grip tightly to Saturn’s
ring with fingers slight as
coffee paper filters-

fearing subconscious slippage

Whispered covenants sink into the
deepest stratum of heavens-
never to rise again as sea foam
from fusing ripples

Hour glass grains are tapering
thinner and thinner by
grandfather-clock tick as church
bells chime in their thoughts,
patience wearing slim-

 

we were supposed to be at the alter by now


I tip my top hat as she peels off
her veil and we coerce our threadlike
vertebras to soar into parting lips,
but a covetous comet strikes her softly-
burnt brims to a crisp and essence to
wedding gown cinders

She’s my lithium; too delicate for wounds
even in her crumble, she’s seamless

Providence withheld adieu to my bride
and I tumbled through air pockets
of our honeymoon,

alone.

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05-02-09

Prompt #17: freefall farewell

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  • This is ever so beautiful.
    I love your metaphors, imagery and word choice.
    It leaves me in awe.
    I can feel each and every sentiment.

  • "Hour glass grains are tapering
    thinner and thinner by
    grandfather-clock tick as church
    bells chime in their thoughts,
    patience wearing slim-


    we were supposed to be at the alter by now


    I tip my top hat as she peels off
    her veil and we coerce our threadlike
    vertebras to soar into parting lips,
    but a covetous comet strikes her softly-
    burnt brims to a crisp and essence to
    wedding gown cinders

    She’s my lithium; too delicate for wounds
    even in her crumble, she’s seamless"


    I'm...... speechless.