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Lick Me

 

 

 

 

I n h a l e

 

just below your ear

and loud enough to hear

you tense

 

H e r e

 

where I caress your soul

brooding chords through your whole

body

 

T i e d

 

to the senses of taste

taking you in haste

frozen

 

S t i f f

 

more than you've ever been

and from the depths within

implied...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

More about politics than sensuality. Considers levels behind 'caviar' and 'taste'.

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  • Daizee silver member
    May 5

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    I think I'm with everyone else below me. The political points must have missed me. I was pretty much stuck on the "just below your ear part..'


  • white stone
    May 4

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    Yeah, I don't care about the politics either, very sensual.
    Excellent write, cool border.


  • faderman1959
    May 4

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    I have to take this in the second sense myself! Quite an excellent read! Well done!


  • Ealdwyne
    May 4

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    Wow, very nice. you never fail to impress me and you've done a fine job here, It is the implied sense that truly makes this beautiful.


  • Metaphorist
    May 3

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    I like the sensual interpretation better too lol. I don't even wanna know the political implications of it. My brain can rarely wrap itself around your political philosophy. Love it anyway


  • sweet arrival gold member
    May 1

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    well.. excuse me, but i read it in the more sensual context and i will keep it that way.
    all the guys reading this can focus on the politics.

    the taste of richness in life that you bring into the picture for me is exciting and fresh, sending a sense of tingle throughout.

    consider yourself licked.

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