Your voice makes my skin crawl
makes me bawl
and scream
and hate with a passion unseen
your touch makes me cry
wonder why
and blame myself
and in and of itself
kills me
your love makes me hurl
my heart unfurls
and inside i die
and i forget to cry
My hate for you fuels my soul
makes me cold
and makes it hard
for me to be scarred
and i find that i am dead...
Author notes
This is to a very "special" person in my life that caused me a lot of pain.
A contest entry
- you are simply undone. by xxRainbowDawnxx.
600 points, ended May 8, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow, this is really sad..and i can relate, powerful poem and keep writing!
good luck
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Very meaningful
I love how your poetry has such a powerful meaning behind it. You have a clear way of putting your emotions and other's emotions into your poetry. Awesome work! i hope you win the contest.
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that was good
i know how u feel...
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