What reasons do you give
for why i should live
do you want to see
what ive done to me
what would you do
if my walls don't move
i need some help i know
but i dont wnat to go
to get the wounds to halt
is impossible when i see my faults
to you, i will open towards,
but i need your words
that say you care for me
then trust you will receive.
Im slowly dying
I can't stop crying
a promise to you I can make
but only for your sake
please just be there
for me when i dont care
i need you to save me
from this monstrosity
i have come to be
you will see me again
that's the promise i will make
What did you think
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Welcome To Allpoetry
In line 8, you misspelled "want". This is such a sad poem. The reader can feel the poet's pain, as each line was read. I hope brighter days ahead for you.
Welcome to Allpoetry and may you enjoy it here!
warm regards,
Jeremy
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Welcome to AllPoetry!
Wow, this is such a powerful poem, and I'm glad you found the strength to make that promise
I hope that you come to enjoy this site as much as I do, and in the meantime if you have any questions at all please don't hesitate to ask me!!
Best of luck with your future writing,
Maria
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