The misty darkness,
Lay around me.
Surrounding me,
Like a swirling pool of hatred.
As i sit in this room,
Filled with darkness,
Filled with hate,
Filled with anger.
You are gone.
i can't live without you.
My walls of my life,
That seemed so strong,
Are now crumbling around me.
With out you,
I am nothing,
Just another lifeless soul,
Walknig the dark and misty streets,
Of my dreams.
My walls of life,
Are falling,
Just because of you.
I can't live without you,
Yet I try anyway.
The misty darkness,
Lay around me,
Just as if your soul was here,
Yet it is gone.
Author notes
one of my WORST poems EVER!!!!! 
its horrid!
A contest entry
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953 points, ended May 29, 91 entries
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tell me what you think. i am only 12 years old.
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Horrid.......NO IT IS NOT! I like it very much thank you. and for being only 12 think it pretty darn good. It is , however, a bit depressing but that is part of the poem. I like the adjs. you used it set the secne perfectly.
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