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Under the Stars

Th waves crashing,
sand beneath my feet.
My heart is a flutter,
staring at the stars so bright.

I sit there and wonder,
the image so perfect.
A dream so vivid,
a reality so true.

The soft gentle touch,
his sweet kiss.
One week
and a dream to live.

Breathing every moment,
for when it ends,
it will all just be a dream
once again.

Just him and me,
on the beach.
That perfect night,
under the stars.

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  • carlylane
    October 9
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    Thank-you all for your beautiful comments!!


  • XRainbowliciousX
    July 7
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    Sweet!!!! Love your poem...you just get lost in your words.


  • Tzipora
    June 26
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    beautiful...this was breathtaking


  • glenn shannon silver member
    May 2
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    when love and passion are that intense a week can be a lifetime .. stunning piece..


  • Jay81
    May 1

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    That was very nice image you painted with your words. Just one week, not enough time. Another great job.


  • Daizee silver member
    May 1

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    So pretty. I hope you can pack a lifetime of dreams into a moment that is never enough. I like this.. very well done

    Stacy

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