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Angel and a Bear

The story of an angel and a bear

One was furry and the other was

           lighter than air

They both like to dance and both

liked to prance,,     Come Jordyn

the angel and bear will give you

                 a chance

You need no music just a thought

within you mind,  please I ask you

        to be so very,very kind

Let the body and mind be free just

          like the bear and me  

Just ask Mommy and daddy and I

          know they will agree, 

Perhaps as they sit down and have

                 a spot of tea

It is fun, fun I tell you, Hmm! don't

you agree   To dance and prance &

and smile if you dare,   It is time my

      child to sleep without a care

for we are your parents who love you

beyond compare,      sleep my Jordyn

for your the gift and a very answered

                     prayer

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  • can you fix the second spelling of jordyn? thank you for entering it into the contest for jordyn and i wish you the very best of luck. viyanna rosemarie


  • stella187
    May 1
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    I think this is really good and lovely.