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Strong yarn


Away from the days discord...

You think and wonder while driving
down the tree swept drive,
Did I set out enough sugar water and did
I lock the back door?

I have to work three more nights.
Today...
Bring something for lunch,
take out the trash press my shirt
and then come home and crash.

Your friends say...


Happy Birthday Denerica,
May you be as happy as
you can be and always,
Perfectly pleased.


With the night air,
You share your chair-
With the stars up there...

 

Listening to the loons call.

Under this
Strong yarn...
A angelic presence
that cares.

Author notes

Happy Birthday dear friend...

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  • Bob Fox
    July 4

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    My

    Now this is a wonderful birthday gift. And this old face falls into a gentle smile. Excellent write poet.


    • campanaro silver member
      July 4

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      Thanks so very much!!

      I'm really glad you liked this write
      and appreciate you taking the time to stop by.
      Take care
      Love Peace
      campanaro


  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    June 12

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    Lovely. You have set a beautiful mood here with the images and lilt of phrasing! This poem seems to recognize some important things and reminds us o seek peace. A wonderful birthday truth.

    • campanaro silver member
      June 12
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      Thank you very much!

      Nice of you to stop by and leave your wisdom your kindness
      and your visionary soul:~)
      Thanks my friend.
      Best
      Love Peace
      campanaro


  • Heroesrox
    May 13

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    This is very good, Sweet Sis. I see why it won ya a trophy! Very sweet dedication. Awesome work here. Keep penning!


  • Amera gold member
    May 12

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    This is truly beautiful and I see why it's wearing a trophy. You let your readers into your thoughts and I find that captivating.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • individuality gold member
    May 12

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    a good piece - ah working long hours, i have done that in the past and hated it and all those thoughts yes of did i turn this off or lock the door. and crashing feeling exhausted - still, you have to smile when it is your birthday and even if it is not


  • Broken-Rickie
    May 10
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    You do dedications so well. This is so beautiful Sis. Congrats on the HM!


    • campanaro silver member
      May 10
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      Thanks so much sis!!

      I appreciate you stopping by and leaving your kind
      thoughts as usual.
      Best
      Love Peace
      campanaro


  • PastelMoons gold member
    May 8
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    Lovely dedication,
    beautiful piece!
    Thank you for sharing

    ~Pastel

    • campanaro silver member
      May 8
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      Thanks so much!!!

      I appreciate your kindness...
      Thanks for stopping by and taking the time to read this write.
      Glad you liked it!
      Take care
      Love Peace
      campanaro

  • Just4u
    May 3

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    This helps remind us that even in the hectic there is peace
    and even in loneliness there are those who care...



    Eddy

    Happy Birthday Denerica...

    • campanaro silver member
      May 3
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      Thank you so much my friend!!

      Very nice of you to visit and leave your kind thoughts as always...
      They are appreciated.
      Thanks again.
      Take care
      Love Peace
      campanaro


  • Life is a Beach gold member
    May 2

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    This is a lovely birthday gift for your friend! Very special! I love the feel of this poem. I love how this poem talks about the worries of the day and ends with sharing a chair with the night air and the stars. That's beautiful! Pam

    • campanaro silver member
      May 3
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      Thanks so very much!!

      My friend how nice of you:~)
      As always it's nice to have you visit..
      Thanks for your kindness.
      Take care
      Love Peace
      campanaro


  • Swangrnv gold member
    May 1

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    aaww

    another wonderful pen, and for a another wonderful friend! i didn't know we had yet another b-day to celebrate either..Happy Birthday Denerica!!


    • campanaro silver member
      May 1
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      Thank you my friend

      Your so appreciated for these words...
      Thanks for taking the time to stop by.
      Best
      always
      Love Peace
      campanaro


  • Denerica
    May 1
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    Wow, did I ever mention too much about complaining about not enough time! I work at nights, I love the line in the night air I share a chair with the stars, to listen to the loons, an angelic presence...my heart is fluttering. Thank you for entering. Blessings.

    • campanaro silver member
      May 1
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      My friend,

      Gosh I'm so glad you liked this...
      Your very kind. I wrote this as if I was working those hours driving the same path and looking up at the stars and listening...
      The very best to you sweet sis.
      Love Peace
      campanaro

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