Right now I do nothing,
But sit and wish to die,
Dear my wonderful family,
This is my suicide,
At one time a saw a reason,
The briefest reason to live,
But now I don’t have anything,
Nothing I can give,
I always screw everything up,
And that is why I cry,
My reasons life are nonexistent,
And so I wish to die,
Slit my wrists,
Cut my throat,
Before I break down and cry,
Punish me for everything,
I just wish to die,
This is my suicide,
My suicide at its best,
I just wish to die,
To die and nothing less,
Suicide,
Suicide,
Come and take me away,
I’m not a little girl anymore,
I no longer wish to play,
I no longer wish to play,
With matches and with death,
I want to know what fire feels like,
And what its like to lose my breath,
If I never breath again,
Would I feel the pain,
Would I still hear people,
Calling me insane,
I just cant take this life anymore,
I will no longer fight,
And so I write this poem,
To tell you of my last night,
This is my suicide,
My suicide at its best,
I wish for nothing else,
But to lay my body to rest
A contest entry
- darkside by emoempess.
700 points, ended May 16, 201 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Cutters And The Suicidal by Juggalette Sammy.
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What did you think
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Great job on writing this poem. I think that you've brought out the deep and raw feelings that some of us that have been suicidal feel.
I worry about if this was just for a contest, or for real. Either way, you did a great job, but please don't really consider this as an option. Suicide is a desolate way to go.
The only thing I would change about this poem is there is a little grammar error that you might have missed. In the 2nd Stanza, you wrote, "At one time a saw a reason,"
I think you meant, "At one time I saw a reason,".
Please fix this little mistake before the contest is up.
Thanks! And good job!
Good luck as well!
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very dark poem...keep up
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This is deep and beautiful It's a sweet sense of suicide I haven't yet seen. Well Done!
-XxFacemyfearsxX
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okayy good write,
I understand this a bit too much.
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this is a wonderfully written poem, but it makes me wonder about your well being. Are you alright or is this just figurative literature? Suicide is NEVER an option.
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This is beautifully written. I've been in this position many times myself, and it seems to always come back to haunt me no matter what i do. I love the way you've expressed it in this poem
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